The first two: -The concept is great, making work with editing more to make it more dramatic. Play with the saturation and contrast. -Maybe you could also retake these and make those spots 3Dish. I don't know photoshop very well but I'm sure there is probably a way through there that you could try and make the spots 3D looking. It would make the photo more surreal. -I'm not sure what you are exactly trying to portray (alien, mermaid, just avant garde makeup) but you could maybe make her skin more green or blue or purple.
Next Set: -Really enjoy these. The lighting great and I not turning them black and white was a idea.
Last Set: -Did you set these up? They are awesome. The shadows work really well. -I love the texture on the "road" for the car makes it more "real"
The ones of the painted person are great, but I wonder if a different background would make them even better. The bottom four are awesome! They looked real at first. The lighting and colors work very well.
Of the pictures with the painted face, I think I like the last two best. I like the purple-ish skin tone, and the bright lipstick. The close-ups are really cool. I think you should try them in black and white or in another color. The miniatures are great! I love the shadows in the first zebra one. The colors are great too. The second zebra one is good too, but I feel like it isn't as strong as the other one.
The third from the top looks like a pencil drawing! Really cool. As far as the sets go, I think the second to last with the toy zebra is the strongest. I would agree with what's been previously said--maybe a different background? Maybe something darker?
-Definitely like the face ones! If I had to choose out of the ones you posted i would go with the last one with the red lips. Maybe try upping the contrast a bit more, or darkening it to make it more dramatic. -The flowerish ones are really beautiful. The framing is nice. -out of the miniature ones I think the zebra ones are more effective. You did a nice job of making it look real.
I really like the variation in all of the photos. I think the most successful one is the photo with the purple complexion and red lips! All in all these photos are really successful and strong.
I will critique this one
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ReplyDelete-The concept is great, making work with editing more to make it more dramatic. Play with the saturation and contrast.
-Maybe you could also retake these and make those spots 3Dish. I don't know photoshop very well but I'm sure there is probably a way through there that you could try and make the spots 3D looking. It would make the photo more surreal.
-I'm not sure what you are exactly trying to portray (alien, mermaid, just avant garde makeup) but you could maybe make her skin more green or blue or purple.
Next Set:
-Really enjoy these. The lighting great and I not turning them black and white was a idea.
Last Set:
-Did you set these up? They are awesome. The shadows work really well.
-I love the texture on the "road" for the car makes it more "real"
The ones of the painted person are great, but I wonder if a different background would make them even better. The bottom four are awesome! They looked real at first. The lighting and colors work very well.
ReplyDeleteOf the pictures with the painted face, I think I like the last two best. I like the purple-ish skin tone, and the bright lipstick. The close-ups are really cool. I think you should try them in black and white or in another color. The miniatures are great! I love the shadows in the first zebra one. The colors are great too. The second zebra one is good too, but I feel like it isn't as strong as the other one.
ReplyDeleteThe third from the top looks like a pencil drawing! Really cool. As far as the sets go, I think the second to last with the toy zebra is the strongest. I would agree with what's been previously said--maybe a different background? Maybe something darker?
ReplyDelete-Definitely like the face ones! If I had to choose out of the ones you posted i would go with the last one with the red lips. Maybe try upping the contrast a bit more, or darkening it to make it more dramatic.
ReplyDelete-The flowerish ones are really beautiful. The framing is nice.
-out of the miniature ones I think the zebra ones are more effective. You did a nice job of making it look real.
I really like the variation in all of the photos. I think the most successful one is the photo with the purple complexion and red lips! All in all these photos are really successful and strong.
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